After a week of searching the southern coasts of Cyprus, I finally found the rare Black Flamingo! It was a relief and an extraordinary sight.
I was relieved because before I came to Cyprus, I bragged to everyone I knew that I had a picture of this amazing creature.
I was ecstatic! I quickly reached for my camera, but my bag was empty.
Panicking, I looked around to see if I dropped it, only to see it underneath the flamingos foot. The flamingo poked it before kicking it into the middle of the lake it standing was in....
This piece sounds like an adventure that you're determined to find that flamingo. I can tell how excited you are to find this flamingo with your use of descriptive words to give the reader a feel of how it felt to capture that moment
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