The Worlds Best Super Hero...
When most people hear the words super hero, they think of a firefighter, doctor, or superman. They do not know about their own super hero, and that is the person who brought them into this world.
Very few people realize that Moms are superheroes too. I have heard about a Mom who decided her child's life was more important than hers. She gave him her heart when his failed.
Another stayed up every night just to make sure her daughter did not die of sleep apnea.
There are a lot more, but my point is to say that Moms are our heroes. They would do anything for us, so never take them for granted.
Great but the part where it says alot more write a lot more.
ReplyDeleteIn the second paragraph, the first sentence after "mom" don't write "do" write "Very few people realize moms are superheroes too" but other wise great story. GOOD LUCK!
ReplyDeleteReally nice story but your third paragraph should be apart of your second paragraph. GOOD LUCK!
ReplyDeleteChange- When most people hear the words super hero
ReplyDeleteInto- When most people hear the words "superhero"
Change-They would do anything for us, so never take them for granted.
Into-They would do anything for us, so never take moms for granted.
"Superhero" is one word not two