A Day I Will Never Forget
There was a rumor a few days ago about a UFO flying over Vancouver, and I just laughed at it.
I mean, who would believe that?
I was proved wrong when later that day, as I was walking home, I had a strange feeling that someone was watching me. So I started to walk faster and faster until I was running. A bright light came from behind me and as I turned around, I realized that the rumors were true.
Behind me was a huge UFO. I screamed and ran into my house. I was dialing 911, when the door opened and there it was again.
your story was awesome! but, I thing you should put a comma after the word "so." GOOD LUCK!
ReplyDeleteYour story is great but I think you should add more detail like what it was and what happens next.
ReplyDeletebut everything else is good gj :D
Deletevey well written but add a bit more detail, it sounds a little veg
ReplyDeletevey well written but add a bit more detail, it sounds a little veg
ReplyDeleteYour story is really good but before again you should put a coma :)
ReplyDeletewow, great story amazing i loved how you made it extra interesting and i also liked your tittle it really suited the story well, one thing i could change is maybe not putting again at the end of your story other then that truly amazing
ReplyDeletewow, great story amazing i loved how you made it extra interesting and i also liked your tittle it really suited the story well, one thing i could change is maybe not putting again at the end of your story other then that truly amazing
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