Captains log, day 46:
Today is my worst sailing day yet.
It started when I heard a noise coming from my cabin, and went to investigate.
The second I stepped inside, I saw a strange man. "Who're you?" I shouted.
" If you care about the safety of your crew, you will leave." he whispered.
"What're you doing," I asked.
"Name?"
"Why?"
" I need your name to report who is responsible for sinking this boat." the man said calmly, lighting a candle.
I lunged forward, but the man moved away, dropping the candle. He charged through the door, locking it behind him. I heard shouts from the crew, as the flame flickered and then went out.
Now I am alone writing this, so people will know how my ship sank...
Your story was really interesting but you have a mistake as there should be a comma after the word " now" in the last sentence good luck!!
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