Monday, April 11, 2016

The Spot


       It was 5 years ago, and I had finally perfected a time portal that could be used to travel through time, space, and sometimes dreams.  I nicknamed it "the spot" hoping people would think it was a stain remover.  
       Anyways, during one of my tests, I ended up on a strange planet.  Before I could even look around, something charged past me.  I jumped out and tried to see where it went, and found it running towards me. 
       I jumped out of the way, causing the creature to go back into the portal. Immediately, I attempted to close it, but the spot just grew and grew....
      
         
         

1 comment:

  1. I do not think that 'Anyways' is required at the beginning of the second paragraph. Other then that great story!😊

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